Your loving curvature

Your love for me, so pure.
For my heart, the only cure.

I know, everything else around is a lie,
And people still don’t believe it. Sigh!

I live my life by tuning to your frequency,
For me you are the only valuable currency.

You are the truth and I am your soul,
Guide me so that I can fulfill my role.

No one can stop me from protecting your army,
I live in your own strong armour, the body.

What had I brought and what will I take!
At the end, even this armour will also break. 

Why will I fight with others and increase the hatred?
When everything in my own life is limited and dated!

You are the all power, all seeing and eternal.
You are my family, both maternal and paternal.

I will try to make you happy and proud, oh my nature!
Because in my eyes, I can see your loving curvature!

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Image source: Nature

Save the nature. Because the feel we have in nature, can never be felt in our artificial and virtual lives. Nature is our protector from the heat and radiation. Now it’s to protect it from our own actions against it.

Thanks for reading. Have a beautiful and natural day.

I don’t know but for some reason my comments on other blogs are not showing up. They are getting into spam folder. Hope it gets resolved soon. Thanks for the support. Stay blessed. πŸ™‚ 

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54 thoughts on “Your loving curvature

    • Jackie Jain 26/03/2017 / 7:06 pm

      Thank you so much Uma.. I like this poem of mine very much. . πŸ˜‰

      Have a good time. πŸ™‚

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  1. saaranshsinghpundir 24/07/2016 / 3:49 pm

    Bhaiii…..awesome…u floored me πŸ˜€
    ‘…You are the all power, all seeing and eternal.
    You are my family, both maternal and paternal.

    I will try to make you happy and proud, oh my nature!
    Because in my eyes, I can see your loving curvature’
    so heartfelt ..loved it πŸ™‚

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    • Jackie Jain 24/07/2016 / 8:51 pm

      Arre Bhai. . .Thank you so much. . Your comments are like decoration to by blog. It becomes more beautiful. Thanks for the support Bhai. .

      Nature deserves pollution free environment bhai. .

      Have a good time bhai. . πŸ™‚

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    • Jackie Jain 22/07/2016 / 11:48 am

      Yes very true, nature is the best medicine for our mind and thoughts. Thanks for loving the poem Mani. .

      And my comments I make on other blogs are going into the spam folder, check out yours. I don’t know why this is happening.

      Have a great day Mani. Keep smiling. πŸ™‚

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  2. Alok Singhal 16/07/2016 / 1:35 am

    First time read a poem from you, and a great job (as expected)! Quite a depth in the words!

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    • Jackie Jain 21/07/2016 / 6:54 pm

      Thank you so much Alok. I am glad that you liked the poem. I keep writing poems once in a while. Thanks. Have a good time.
      Sorry for the late reply, I was on a 6 day trip to Pune.

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  3. Somali K Chakrabarti 15/07/2016 / 10:43 pm

    This is absolutely lovely, and this is how we should ideally relate with nature. The last line is the best ..no wonder you have chosen it as the title Jackie.

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    • Jackie Jain 16/07/2016 / 12:21 am

      Hello Somali. . Thank you so much Somali. Yes, we have to relate ourselves with our nature as it is a part of our family. But for us it has become just a resource and we don’t care about protecting it. I wish everyone’s view changes on this issue!

      Thanks for reading! You won’t believe the happy feeling I got when I was thinking of a word which rhythms with nature and Curvature struck my mind and I was like wow! Thanks!

      Have a great weekend ahead Somali. I will be traveling to Pune tomorrow for a 4 day tour.

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  4. Sayanti aka Shine 14/07/2016 / 4:33 pm

    A beautiful analogy, Jackie. a different way to look at the nature. Very natural and loved the poem and the rhythm.

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    • Jackie Jain 14/07/2016 / 6:31 pm

      Hello Sayanti. .Thank you so much. I am glad that you liked this poem and the message it carries. Our Nature has to be more natural and pure.

      Good evening.. πŸ™‚

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  5. Sunshine on my tea cup 14/07/2016 / 4:31 pm

    Wow! Back with a bang I must say. This is brilliant! And it is beautiful to see how you brought forward such an important issue – in such a brilliant way!

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    • Jackie Jain 14/07/2016 / 6:27 pm

      Thank you so much Sri di. Your support has been inspirational. . Your feedback makes me happy. Yes, nature is in danger as it not natural any more. Hope it survives human greediness and advancements.

      Have a good time Sri di. πŸ™‚

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    • Jackie Jain 14/07/2016 / 12:09 pm

      Hello Sharmishtha madam. Thank you so much for reading and liking the post. I am glad.

      Have a great day ahead. πŸ™‚

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  6. LiteraryFuzz 13/07/2016 / 10:51 pm

    I love some good rhyming couplets. Great poetry, looking forward to reading some more!

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    • Jackie Jain 13/07/2016 / 10:56 pm

      Hello, Thank you so much. I am glad that you liked it. Welcome to the blog.

      I have checked your blog. It is amazing. But the problem is that from few days my comments are going into the spam folder. So check your spam for my comments on your posts. Thanks.

      Keep smiling. Have a good day! πŸ™‚

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    • Jackie Jain 13/07/2016 / 9:28 pm

      Thank you so much Antra. . I am glad that you liked it.

      And my comments which I make on other blogs are going into spam, I don’t know why! Hope it gets fixed soon. Once check your spam folder.

      Have a good time. πŸ™‚

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      • Antra 13/07/2016 / 9:32 pm

        Yeah sure!
        Stay happy! Stay bleased :))

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      • Jackie Jain 13/07/2016 / 9:42 pm

        Thanks Antra. Wishing you the same. Keep smiling. πŸ™‚

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  7. AKIRAA 13/07/2016 / 7:10 pm

    This was soo beautiful! Loved it..😊
    I took a very long break but now when I’m here I’m seeing really great stuff and yes yours is also included..Amazing work done!

    Keep Smiling! πŸ™‚
    Akiraa

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    • Jackie Jain 13/07/2016 / 7:20 pm

      Thank you so much Akiraa. . I am glad that you loved it! Really? Then we are on the same side. I also took a break of about 2 months from blogging. Started back just last Saturday. It’s been a long time .Thanks. It would be great to check out your new posts.

      Keep smiling too. Keep blogging. Good evening.

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      • AKIRAA 13/07/2016 / 7:25 pm

        Good Evening!
        Yeah its been a long time since i blogged.. will be posting in some what 10mins.. πŸ˜€

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      • Jackie Jain 13/07/2016 / 7:55 pm

        That’s cool Akiraa. . Will be reading them in a while then. And check spam folder. Because my comments on other blogs are going into spam, I don’t know why!

        Have a good time. πŸ™‚

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    • Jackie Jain 13/07/2016 / 7:01 pm

      Hi Bhanu. . Thanks. Took a break from blogging for 2 months. Thanks for your warm welcome. How are you?

      Have a good time. πŸ™‚

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